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Commission - Those Eyes of Hers

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Name: Leonie Johanna von Faust
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Job: none (she lives with wealthy family)
Hair color: Brown
Eye color: Gold with cat slits for pupils
Personality: She's very polite and quiet, but often gets frustrated easily.
Likes: Chess, cats, antique colored roses, jewelry, tea
Dislikes: Filth, sweets, wine
Crush: Prince Soma Asman Kadar

        It was a beautiful day in London! The birds were chirping and the butterflies flapped their rainbow colored wings. The sun was in the center of the sky and the clouds were like a cape wrapping themselves around it. Everything was peaceful until…

        "I'M BACK CIEL!!!!" Prince Soma yelled barging into the Phantomhive manor hoping there was a party for his return but to his dismay, no one came to greet him.

"Hello?" Prince Soma said, hearing the loud echo of his voice jump off the walls. It was definitely too quiet here.

        "Agni, are you sure Ciel's home?" Prince Soma asked his most trustworthy servant. Agni nodded his head in response.

        "I sent a message to Sebastian asking if we could visit Ciel today. He said yes but also said that Ciel would be having company for a few days." Agni said. Prince Soma started to pout about this. He began stomping up the stairs and opening every single door until he found Ciel.

        He was about to barge into another one when he suddenly heard a very soothing feminine voice on the other side.

        "Are you sure it's okay for me to stay? I mean, I hear that you would be having another guest visiting this week with you." Prince Soma heard shuffling in the room.

        "My prince, what are you doing?" Agni whispered.

       "Shhhh!" Soma told Agni. He and Agni both put up their ears to the door trying to here the conversation that was going on. Suddenly the door flung open by none other than Sebastian who looked at them with a calm smile. In the back, Prince Soma could see a very annoyed Ciel twitching his eye.

        "What is it Sebastian?" A young beautiful lady turned around to see what all the commotion was about. Once there eyes met, a sudden electric shock went through them. A long pause past and Prince Soma kept staring at her.

        "It's not wise to stare at women like that Prince Soma." Sebastian whispered into Prince Soma's ear. He quickly turned away from her, his cheeks a little rosy.

        "So this is the famous Indian prince you've been talking about Ciel?" The young lady whispered to Ciel. Ciel only nodded his head trying to forget he even knew him. Since no one was making a move to introduce her to them (even Sebastian didn't want to do it!) The young lady stood up and walked over to Prince Soma and did an elegant curtsy.

        Getting a closer look at her, Prince Soma noticed that she had long lushes chocolate brown hair and beautiful yellow topaz cat eyes. This lady looked so fragile and gentle but when she looked back at him, they were a sort of daring glare.

        "Good morning, Mr. Prince. My name is Leonie Johanna von Faust. I'll be staying at this residence for a few days. I hope we can get along."

        "Please madam, Call his royal highness Prince Soma not Mr. Prince." Agni said with a small touch of authority. Leonie looked at Agni and smiled a warmly.

        "You must be Agni. It's a pleasure to meet you!" She said, ignoring what Agni said. Before anyone else could say anything, Ciel yawned saying that it was time for him to work and for everyone to get out of his office.


        Sebastian closed the door behind him before he looked back at Prince Soma, Agni, and
Leonie. Leonie was somewhat being distant from the other two while Prince Soma couldn't stop looking at her. It was a shame that Agni was in the middle of the two; he could feel both of their opposite feelings collide right in front of him.

        "Well then…Miss. Leonie, I will show you where you'll be staying for the next few weeks. You two can do whatever you want." Sebastian then took Leonie down one of the long dark hallways leaving Agni and Prince Soma to do whatever they thought would entertain them.

        Agni gave out a sigh before he looked back at his Prince only to see a very scary blank open space. Panicking, he quickly called out his Princes name and began to search the maze like mansion of the Phantomhive's residence.


        In the suit of armor next to where Agni was standing did Prince Soma hide. He felt bad for making his loyal servant freak out but he just needed to talk to Ciel alone. Getting out of the armor Prince Soma knocked on Ciel's door.

        "Huh, come-," Ciel almost finished his sentence before Prince Soma barged in yet again but this time knocking one of his paintings off the wall.

        "I need your help Ciel!" Prince Soma yelled. Ciel's personality began to flare into anger

       "…With what?" Ciel asked with gritted teeth. Prince Soma walked straight up to Ciel not noticing the temper he was in and put his hands on Ciels shoulders.

        "I want to know more about Leonie." Of course, is what Ciel thought but this just may be his chance to have some fun. Grinning, Ciel grabbed Prince Soma bringing him close to his face.

        "Fine then, if you want my help so badly. You're going to have to do everything I say." Ciel said before letting go of Prince Soma's collar. This side had always made Prince Soma worry for Ciel. Ciel could be so cruel and for his age which wasn't healthy mentally or physically.

        Ciel walked over to his window and looked outside at his lushes lawn. Down below, he could see his stupid servants trying to feed Pluto and definitely not succeeding.

        "Miss Leonie is not very open to others. In other words, she's shy but once you befriend her. She never turns her back on you. She lives with a wealthy family and to expand my company I'm going to need her families help. She also dislikes those who look down on others…." Ciel told Prince Soma a few more facts about Leonie. Prince Soma was practically taking notes on everything Ciel said before Ciel abruptly stopped talking.

        "Is that all you know Ciel?" Prince Soma asked looked down at the small blue haired boy.

        "…If you want more information, you're going to have to play a special game with me." Ciel said smirking and looking at the very vivacious prince.

        "Ooooo, what kind of game Ciel? No matter what I'll win if it's for Miss Leonie!!!!" Prince Soma smiled brightly.

        "Hmmm….. I wonder about that now." Ciel said before he went to his desk and scribbled something on a piece of paper. Before handing it to Prince Soma he looked up at him and said, "If you follow these rules, you will win. If you don't, you will lose and will not gain anything from me about Leonie." Prince Soma began to read what Ciel had written on the piece of paper.

It read the following:

        1. Prince Soma must not disturb Ciel and for every day (Excluding when in the presence of Leonie) he does this, Ciel will tell you something about Leonie.

        2. Every day you must learn something new from the Phantomhive Servants (Agni cannot help you in any way) and then tell Sebastian what you learned.

        3.  You must not freak out or give anything to Miss. Leonie while she stays over.

        4. If you do not follow any of these rules. I win the game and you lose.



        "What kind of rules are these Ciel! I want to get to know Leonie more but I also came here to see y-"

        "You have five seconds to get out of my presence before you lose the game." Ciel said and Prince Soma was out the door feeling depressed that he wouldn't be able to see Ciel for the next week.


        Six days had passed and he had already learned that Miss Leonie enjoyed tea, loves cats, is very good at Chess, dislikes sweets and wine, loves roses, gets frustrated easily if she can't figure something out (saw her pacing the room a lot with teeth gritted after she couldn't play a certain piece on the piano).

        He had also learned how to do manly pushups from Bard, make a bed from Mey-Rin, water flowers from Finn, bake a pie, learn how to create jewelry,  make tea, and learn to be fine gentleman today from Sebastian (^^).

        Not being able to see Ciel has been killing Prince Soma. His hair was somewhat falling out (making Agni worry that he was going to go bald) and making him less hungry.

        He'd also noticed that whenever he's learning something new from the servants that Miss.

        Leonie is watching him with cold but admiring eyes. They haven't talked very much to each other unless Ciel is around but he can tell that she was warming up to him.

        Finally done with getting all dressed up in a fine silk black suite, snow white gloves, and hair combed back (still wearing his gold ear piercings); Prince Soma knocked of Ciels door.

       "Come in." Ciel said. Twisting the handle gently and calmly, Prince Soma walked in with a warm gentle smile. He could see the shock in Ciel's eyes already. Trying to stay under control Prince Soma walked in and bowed before he said,

        "Good afternoon Ciel. Sebastian taught me all about your traditions on how to be a gentlemen." Prince Soma said feeling emotions of proving Ciel wrong wanting to burst out.

        "I can definitely see that… So you want to know more about Miss. Leonie?" Ciel said getting up from his chair and walking over to Prince Soma with a small scowl on his face.

        "I would appreciate it." Prince Soma said with a little eager in his voice. Ciel then smiled looking down at the floor.

        "Very well then but you might want to take a seat." Ciel said gesturing towards the usual tea area. Prince Soma took a seat and waited patiently for Ciel to continue. Ciel turning his back to Prince Soma began.

        "Miss. Leonie is a very fragile girl." Ciel said. A long pause went around the room.

        "W-what do you mean?" Prince Soma questioned. Ciel turned around to look at him.

        "She was born into a family where if you didn't do as you were told, you would be punished severely. For instance, if she was told to play Paganini caprice 24 on the violin perfectly but messed up a note, she would be whipped by a ruler on her arms until they were bloody and bruised. Her grandfather was the one who punished her mainly. Her father and mother were usually out of the country in India helping sell special antiques to your people…" Ciels words were getting to Prince Soma.

        "This is probably why she is scared of men that she doesn't know but also tries to stay distant from you. One of your older brothers is the one who made her parents have to come and sell their products with their own hands" No wonder she'd look down at the floor whenever any of the male servants talked to her and give a cold glare to him whenever they were alone.

        "That's everything that I know about her but if you-" Ciel was about to say more until another knock was heard. Sebastian suddenly came in with a sort of grieving expression on his face.

        "Hmmm, how to put this, Miss. Leonie decided to go through the rose maze but she hasn't been back since tea time and it's getting late. I tried loo-"

        "WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHE'S GONE MISSING?!" Prince Soma said before racing out of the room and running towards the maze.

        "Oh dear, I didn't expect him to be so aggravated when I said that." Sebastian said looking back at his master with a smirk.


        Running through passages in the long narrow maze, Prince Soma couldn't find Leonie. He was even lost himself now. He had to find her, he couldn't let her get eaten by those weird looking monsters with red pointy hats, white beards, fat belly, and creepy grins on their faces that were all around the Mansion now glaring at him!

        "MISS LEONIE!!!" Prince Soma yelled out hearing the echo of his voice like the first day that he had come back to the mansion. He ran faster beginning to only see blurs of red and green around him. Suddenly, he tripped over something small hiding in the rose bushes.

        Noticing the bright yellow dress, chocolate brown hair, and long beautiful eyelashes did he quickly go up to her and look down at her sleeping face.

        "Leonie? Hey!" Prince Soma said before he saw her begin to stir.

        "Prince Soma…Is that you?" She said before looking up at him with her golden cat eyes.

        Relieved, Prince Soma embraced her in a bear hug but Leonie noticing what was happening; Leonie pushed Prince Soma away with panicking eyes and tense body.

        "Wh-what are you doing!!" She said before sliding away from him. Noticing the fragile state she was in, he leaped back.

        "I-I'm sorry, I was just worried and Sebastian had told me that you had gotten lost in this weird maze and I didn't want any of those small people with pointy hats to come after you and take you away from me." Leonie gave him a weird questioning look but then realizing what he was saying began to laugh.

        "Hahahahaha! Little people? Do you mean those gnomes!! Pah-hahahahah!" She couldn't stop until Prince Soma's face began to turn red. Seeing his embarrassed face, Leonie stood up and held out her hand to Prince Soma.

        Looking up at her delicate hand reaching out for him, he took it. She pulled him upward until they were both standing. The weird thing for her was that he didn't let go of her hand and instead put his other hand on top of hers.

        Feeling something slide into her palm did Prince Soma take away his hands for her to see the present that he had been working on ever since Sebastian had to him how to make them.

        "This is for you." He said. Opening her hand, she looked down with amazed eyes at a beautiful beryl cut antique rose necklace.

        "…You made this…For me?" She said feeling the heat begin cover her cheeks.

        "Y-yea. It reminded me of your beautiful eyes." Prince Soma said looking in a different direction trying to avoid her gaze. She may not be able to accept his brothers but she could definitely come to like this crazy happy prince. Instead of saying anything else, she clipped the necklace on and quickly kissed Prince Somas cheek.

        Shocked at what had just happened, Prince Soma fainted leaving Leonie to panic at the situation that had just formed.


*ON ONE OF CIELS BALCONY'S*

        Looking through his binoculars, Ciel saw Prince Soma faint after getting a kiss from Leonie.

        "Well what do you know, Leonie can now accept another man into her life." Ciel said before looking back at his butler.

        "If you hadn't helped Prince Soma though, I don't know what would have happened." Sebastian said with a grin.

        "It was definitely smart of you young master to put those gnomes around the mansion and then move them in different locations each day though. To think that he was afraid of them." Ciel began to snicker at Sebastian's comment.

        "But I do wonder," Sebastian's eyes began to glow a dangerous bloody red. Ciel's laugh died away.

        "Would your game have ended differently if it hadn't been Leonie that we were talking about?" Ciel just stared at his butler with a cold gaze. Turning back at the new couple, Ciel whispered.

        "I will do whatever it takes to climb to the top and meet that person again. No matter even if I have to kill this new couple or make them prosper." Ciel twisted his body to face Sebastian, the wind beginning to pick up.

        "Sebastian, this is an order," Ciel took of his eye patch revealing his contracts with the demon.

        " Make sure I win this game!" He said with no doubt or fear but with power and authority.

        Smiling, Sebastian went on one knee and crossed his right arm over his chest.

Yes my Lord
This is for :iconkoromarimo: who asked for a 1000+ word short story. I hope she enjoys it! :D

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Word Count: 2,217
Artwork done by Nardack on zerochan.net

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